"why did you live me"
said he
"lacking inspiration
thanks to thee"
his mouth fell down
as he intended to add
what
she will never figure out
then he knelt and started
crawling,searching
for his words
scattered around
from his mouth
rolling on the ground
glittering but lost words
like some jewels
long forgotton
laying in an old purse
3 comments:
Such an original image and perfectly expressed word drawing of a relationship.
glad you enjoyed it:)
eywallah!
I liked this one too...something about playing with words in poems the way you have really works for me.
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