Wednesday, March 4, 2009

Left this and her initials on a piece of paper

Was too short, the time we shared I mean, yet deeply profound
like a vision of heaven seen in a tasteful dream, or maybe
like standing under graceful water
falling from a graceful cloud that follows the thirsty, or maybe
like a hopeful song kidnapped by a crazy wind, yet you still can hear the echo
There must be a replay button somewhere here, darling.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Absolutely beautiful, Sherry. A whole feeling and relationship in a few words. Very very lovely.

köz said...

this huzunlu note with water and wind(air) reminds me the other two, earth and fire.. i guess fire is what is left inside whereas earth what she is heading....

Eman said...

Sublime. Let me just say that this is my favorite thing you have written by far, compact and powerful, full of meaning.

PS Don't you wish there was a replay button besides that of memory?

Devil Finch said...

I'm sure there isa replay button. And you know what, the reply is even better.

Cosmictree said...

Thanks my friends!

I love reading your comments:)

Anonymous said...

Great Shereefa , congratulations , a few words but tell a lot !! we all need such a button , it's a gorgeous idea!!

Cosmictree said...

Thank you anonymous:)